Uncertain

about my confused experiences with life and failure to understand what i am heading towards

It feels like I'm always in a rush
I'm doing a lot yet left so much
I don't know where I'm heading to
just running I'm just through

I just want to close my eyes
may should I relax a while
I guess Frost just said it right
We all are fighters we have to fight

Woods may be lovely, dark and deep
even though there are no promises to keep
I just can't stop by the grooves
because you know its lot to prove

I took the road less traveled
no regret but i feel crippled
there no way to go back
How many times do i pack unpack?

Author's Note

I'm just a beginner but I want to go a long way..

Reviews

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love the allusions to Frost and his work... one of the most difficult things to do nowadays is to slow down, to unpack for the long haul and simply enjoy what life offers us... we have so many things pulling at us in different directions that it is difficult to see beauty around us when all we catch are blurred glimpses of life as it passes us by... your poem has inspired deep thought, Kajal...thanks for sharing!

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much for such a great review

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you are welcome!

[Tomoe Tellez]

Hadn't read this one, now I wish I had read it first. It is a great poem. Sometimes we just feel like something is wrong, but we don't know what's it is, or what he have done wrong or what we haven't done right.

[MadalaJose]

And its a poem that relates to life. making choices, not sure of outcomes. keep on the good work.


I took the road less traveled
no regret but i feel crippled
there no way to go back
How many times do i pack unpack?

Sweet!!

[MadalaJose]

wow. I like it. The uncertainty of life. Robert Frost-The Road not taken: you are very creative.

The wording is on point.The flow is very fast: pacing. I like it.

[Arjun Singh]

A short write, yt full of impact....
Jst work on ur style nd vocabulary, nd u will indeed go a long way...
:)

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

Robert Frost is one of the most prolific writers in the history of the world...and I think he would smile to see you have read his poetry

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You wanna go a long way huh? well, if you keep sharing poetry like this, then you will! :) awesome poem, i can relate. 100 points. Thanks for sharing.

[Terry O'Leary]

Nice poem... thought provoking!
Great 'beginning' for a 'beginner'...

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you Terry

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Good thoughts and quote.
"We all are fighters we have to fight

Woods may be lovely, dark and deep
even though there are no promises to keep"
Above lines are true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[StimulateyourCreativity]

very nice job, first few lines describe me

[Kajal Sharma]

thank uh so much if uh like dis one check out the one titled 'kill your girl child'

[Ben Noah Suri]

Liked this though I have a slightly different view. Nothing stops us from relaxing and slowing down. It is our mind which makes us believe that there is no other option. Calm the mind and you will be rewarded with a relaxed life style