Robo-Tick Age

Robo-tick age 

As I ponder over the worldly power
 My creative horses run all over

Bingo! If babies were born in a mechanised cot
Cheers! women would hardly opt for a diet slot

Cars would ramp-walk with flashy controllers
How about a rendezvous on cosmic stroller?

Heart would pump through cellular vibes
O'Brain, physics will pour thou with life

Sigh! Who is the parent of 'love' in them all ? 
Who is the creator of 'soul' in the techno brawl ? 
Can science topple over the natural flavours?
Can humanity be splashed in these robotic endeavours? 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good questions in the poem. I pray science leave babies making to the mama's. Love for child is precious and wonderful. A interesting poem. Government and science need to leave the birth of children alone. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kajal Gulabani]

Th

So damn true.. Thanks.

[Bakor War]

i agree with the message of your poem here. Science may have made our lives easier and will continue to do so but there is an equally dangerous chance that we ourselves can turn into robots.

[Kajal Gulabani]

Yess.. Let's hope for the best. Thanks for the review.

[kelvin]

Nicely written read for yes this world has turned to a robotic sense for mechanics robotics can never in my opinion over take the mechanics of all things natural like creating life, feelings of emotion, compassion, the warm touch of another and so on and so on as always keep writing fellow writer. You raised some good things here.

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thank you kelvin :)

[kelvin]

You're very welcome

[WingsToFly]

interesting writing style and very thought provoking.

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thank you.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nice question Kajal. Well set out in verse that challenges us to contemplate how far we go with technology. Today the IPad tomorrow the Matrix!

[Kajal Gulabani]

Indeed John.. Thank yous :)

[Holly Mason]

makes you think and wonder
thank you for sharing

[Kajal Gulabani]

Many thanks

[khalid]

that is really mind provoking poem. i dont know to where again would technology lead us after all of that..
very nicely penned..

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thank you so much

[khalid]

ur welcome

[Leigh]

Is this happenning already? this brings up some interesting thoughts and i love the way youve presented it

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thank you Leigh.. Received the books. Thanks :)

[Leigh]

Wow that took a while, so glad you got them :-)

[Steven Ingels]

Robots are awesome

[Kajal Gulabani]

Yessss