My Stranger

Passion, Love

Mere a stranger few days before,

Is now my heart- my soul.

His eyes talk aloud every emotion,

Words unsaid and deep hidden,

The hold of his hand has made me complete,

My world stands still when our eyes meet.

Love me little " love me long,

Thy embrace is all I want !!

Reviews

[Stonz P.]

This is somewhat my story.
Haha.. I'll have 'My Stranger' read it when she's good.

Totally loved this :)

[Clayton Bardwell]

Ah, the mystery of new love. A look, a touch, an embrace.

Passion in 8 lines.

[Kajal Gulabani]

:) yepp

[Akshat♥]

Short and sweet poem:)
I really like this picture..lol
I guess everyone needs love ..
because nowadays it is decreasing in great scale
if u can then try to write few more paragraphs..
overall lovely write..keep writing!!:)

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thanks a tonne.. I surely will.. smiles !!!!

[Akshat♥]

you are always welcome dear :)

[skiayly]

Perfectly put together.

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thanks a tonne...

[Hannah Messer]

I love this. It's short, but it tells a perfect little story in 8 lines. That's really difficult to do. Great job.

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thank you very much. It was a challenge which I undertook. Making things simple and readable yet beautiful.