stranger part two

stranger part two

Tears stream down my face as he holds me close to him. He tells me not to worry as I struggle in his arms. He says he dosen't want to hurt me but I can't believe him. I push at his chest trying to break free he laughs softly. He sets me down and walks to the door I hear the small clicking noise of the lock. I back up towards the window wondering if i should jump. I don't even have time to open the window he rushes towards me and lifts me away from the window. A scream rises it's way up my throat but his hand is over my mouth. He lays me on the bed and starts kissing me claiming my mouth with his. I try to kick him but he lays on top of me putting his full wieght on me. He holds my arms down with his knees and slowly unbuttons my shirt. I twist and turn under him. He tells me to stop and be quiet I stop moving and my breath catches as his hand slides up my waist. He tells me to take his shirt off I'm afraid of him so i listen. He undresses me and then himself he kisses me hard. He's touching me every where and I can't stop crying. He pushes in me slowly I try not to scream as his thrusts get harder after he finds his release he lays on me. After a few minuets he gets up and leaves, I hear the door slam shut and then a car pull out of the drive way. I walk down the stairs and find a note that says he will be back and to be ready.

Reviews

[Mike Espinosa]

Very intense. You were able to keep me reading. I think this would almost make a good poem, the way you wrote it. It has a kind of poetic rhythm that pushed me through the sentences with ease. Very cool.