Snowy Night [12-22-06]

I wrote this poem around Christmas time, when I was really depressed and saw no hope in my future...of course nowadays I'm better but this is an old work I had lying around

The cold calm air
Blows in the night.
Endless bustling crowds
Swarm concrete towers.
Snow falls,
Endless white;
I stand in a nameless crowd,
Thinking lost joy.
Where is that love?
That left me cold, alone.
Hollowness, her gift.

Reviews

[shadadakiya]

i love it it so crisp and Say's so much with so little words great write