This is written so, so well! So detailed and the dialogue is realistic and amazing. The descriptions here are grand and it makes you feel as if you're really there. It's full of emotion already. You can see the characters clearly and I really do love the detail and obvious love you put into this. It already feels like an exciting adventure and I can't wait to see more! I also really liked the names of the characters. I'm very excited to see what else your writing brings!
This is very 👍, so good. I am studying the use of dialogue currently to apply it to my writing, and I feel like you do it so well. You description is also awesome!
This is written so, so well! So detailed and the dialogue is realistic and amazing. The descriptions here are grand and it makes you feel as if you're really there. It's full of emotion already. You can see the characters clearly and I really do love the detail and obvious love you put into this. It already feels like an exciting adventure and I can't wait to see more! I also really liked the names of the characters. I'm very excited to see what else your writing brings!