The Radiation of Joy
A Poem by Sabrina Fowl
A poem I wrote while I was bored, watching my family watch a movie. Don't ask.
The gentle push
Hits me
With a thump
The peach waves
Crashing down
Engulf me
In their happiness
The radiation
Of joy
Is more
contagious
Than the flu
Joy is a disease
That must be
Spread
And given
To every
Soul
© 2012 Sabrina Fowl
Author's Note
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Thanks for reviews!!!
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Reviews
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You really meant joy as a disease.
May I brand it as a desirable disease?
Well,I will ask no more question.
I fully agree with you that the disease must be spread to every soul for its good.
Wonderful imaginative work!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
Thanks for the review! I was inspired by my friends actions. One of us was really down, but another .. read moreThanks for the review! I was inspired by my friends actions. One of us was really down, but another happy. She started telling jokes and laughing, and eventually everyone was laughing with her.
Thanks again, for taking an interest!
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12 Years Ago
You are always welcome.
Happy to learn the background of the poem.
I like the way you pr.. read moreYou are always welcome.
Happy to learn the background of the poem.
I like the way you presented.
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Added on May 3, 2012
Last Updated on May 3, 2012
Tags: Radiation, Joy
Author
Sabrina Fowl
About
I am a student, and I LOVE writing. Some people read while walking, but I write. I want to spread my writing, and read yours too!
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I write fanfiction, as well as regular stories. My profile page .. more..
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