Life is to Live

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Life is to Live

Life is to live and live is to love

   death is some mud on a milky-white dove

To sing is to live in the realms of sound

   but pitch it too high

      and you'll hit the ground.

Author's Note

Thanks for reviewing! I will personally read and take into account each one, and use your advice to improve future poems

Reviews

[luna11]

Short, but very well written.
I love it :)

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

hmm..........gives me something to think............nice one :-)