Courage

Just a poem I whipped up. Please review!

If love could dance upon the stars

It would be pink

Like the glitter in your eyes

When you looked at me for the first time.

 

If time could stop

It would stop in that moment

The moment you first spoke

To me

 

When I can see

I will look into your eyes

Those gentle eyes

 

When I can speak

I will talk soft

Like they you speak to me

 

But that’s when I get courage. 

Author's Note

Thanks For Reviewing! First Poem I've written in a while, so feel free to hammer me back into shape!

Reviews

[cody mclaughlin]

Same here

[RachelReaper]

aw, how sweet! I have to say that my favorite lines are the first three, because the imagery is so strong. At first I didn't understand why it was called courage, but I now understand.