One More Mile

One More Mile

A Poem by Kaela Craven
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About not being selfish in a relationship

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I can swim one more mile

In a drowning moment �"

The heaviness of oceans

Caving in.


And you’re the one
I almost gave my life for.

You’re the one who gave me land.

I can swim one more mile in a drowning world 

To reach your hand.

© 2010 Kaela Craven


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Very good poem, i like the last three lines, in my opinion, it's the spotlight of the poem. Very good.

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Kaela Craven
Kaela Craven

Tucson, AZ



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