Azure Remembrance

 

I once walked in lands of summer

Whitewashed like Greek islands

On a crest of earth beneath the open azure.

Girls hummed on the breeze

And nights were just intro

To sunlight.

 

Some days

When the windows are open

And the trees relax under the sky

I'm reminded of the summer

Long since faded to dusk inside of me.

It's a remembrance on the cusp of darkness

That lands like a whisper

And dies.

 

The ego of youth

The invincibility

Mocks me.

I am walking in autumn now

And autumn only answers

To winter.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

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and a pleasure to read, what i liked most, the choice and intelligent design, keep up the awsome work

[Christopher.Holmberg]

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I advise you to check out some of my writing you may enjoy it, we have a similar style.
GReat job A+

[jdog]

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[Deborah Leah Krempa]

You write very lovely words of poetry. Enjoyed reading this poem very much. Thank you for sharing. Debileah