Catch me

I hear the sound of your voice,

so far now it seems to be the distant roar of an old engine

I have etched in my memory

The days of my dreams of you in my arms

Dancing through the night,

under the kiss of the stars would I place my lips on yours

Watch you sketch the map of a mystical world in my heart where it is only you and I

And when the dawn breaks I would hold you in my arms,

shelter you from the storms of day

While at sundown I would hear all you have to say

Waiting to lick the salt of your tears and kiss the dust off of your feet

But would you catch me?

Waiting on you became a pattern

Serving you,a song yet loving you unfathomed remained a dream

And day after day, I watched the clouds pass me by

All the time,taking my breath with you

Now every glance would be paid for by a part of me

As I thirst for more of you

To hold you

To cherish the price of your lips

And cherish the price of your lips

And worship the glory of your being 

All you could do was eat away at my heart like a cancer

Steal from me little bits of my spirit

Never anything I wouldn't give willingly but you would rather obtain forcefully,

Seizing

And finally as I fell

Completely at the mercy of your love 

You failed me,and missed me

Would you just catch me and let me serve you

Catch me? 

Author's Note

Comments and constructive criticism is welcome

Reviews

[S.R.M.]

I love this poem, the metaphor of the engine is very powerful, as is your writing style. This has so much emotion behind it, and that is evident. Great job :)

[kaekay]

thanks a mill.....