Tell Him

Tell Him

A Poem by Kaelani

Tell Him You Love Him
Before He Leaves
Tell Him You Love Him
Despite Your Belifs
Tell Him You Love Him
No Matter What People Say
Tell Him You Love Him
Day After Day
Tell Him You Love Him
And That You Always Would
Tell Him You Love Him
And That Your His For Good
Tell Him You Love Him
And You Dont Want Him To Go
Tell Him You Love Him
And That You Want It To Show
Tell Him You Love Him
And You Want Him Forever
Tell Him You Love Him
And That Hes So Clever
Tell Him You Love Him
And Hope He Loves You Too
Tell Him You Love Him
And Always tell him Thank You
Tell Him You Love Him
And Dont Want Him To Go
Tell Him You Love Him
And Now He'll Know

© 2008 Kaelani


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LOVED IT!!! the repeating of the "Tell Him You Love Him" really makes the poem. it made you read it faster and faster till you reach the end, just loved it!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Usually, repetitive poetry is not enjoyable to me, but you pulled it off here. The flow was fast and furious like the urgent need to "Tell him you love him". Superb.

Posted 16 Years Ago


you changed your style!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 29, 2008

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Kaelani
Kaelani

avon, NC



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