She Cuts once; She Cuts Twice

 

I think we have a emergency
she cut her self again
but this isn’t like before
this time she wanted to end her life
so she got a deadly knife
she cut once
she cut twice
she bleeds
bloods flowing from her wrists
but it slows
its not enough she cuts again
she cries with the pain
as she made the cuts deeper
more blood came
she feels weak
surrounded by her little pool of blood
she drops her knife
that helped her end her life
her vision starts to fade
and she thinks to her self ,finally,
we had a emergency
but its too late now , shes gone

Reviews

[chris' girlfriend]

wow when the poem ends so does her life

[Sarah]

That was depressing. But I suppose that was the purpose. x) I liked how you began the poem & ended it with dialogue (or it sounds like dialogue, anyway) that really made it come together at the end. One typo: last line, "to" should be "too". :)