flawless angel

"I wish i were a guy" she made girls scream...
"Oh i wish i were a straight guy" she made gays sing...
She even made a blind man wink...
And made a white man take off his man wig...
She is the only woman that could have brought Shaka on his knees by being keen nd blowing a kiss...

She is like a blue crane
That chose to land on my hands,
And used my heart as her nest waitin for her next to hetch....
for i took good care of her Heart and she took very good care of my heart....

She was a queen...
For my heart was her thrown nd my body was her castle.....
And no other princess would dare to over throw her...
For she was walking tall
With the devils heels nd used no pills...
And she flew sky high flocking her eagles wings...
Her bones were weak and her love was strong and her feelings for me were tough ....
For her nails were not long and she did no wrong....
She was tht eagle print in my t-shirt for she was my ego ......

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' I wish i were a guy" she made girls scream... "Oh i wish i were a straight guy" she made gays sing... She even made a blind man wink... And made a white man take off his man wig... '

What great opening lines, they just call for the reader to continue then - to review! So, I am!. Can near hear the voice voice in this - from start to finish and back again. You've created a succession of movements finish to clever ending.. Good stuff.