The comedian

Hope can make you laugh

Talking less laughing more,
A man foundon seashore,
This man is good from heart's core,
1. To. 3. 4. ,
Numbers because four is rhyming word of core
In his smile there is something which is mixed ,
Once you see him your smile will be fixed,
Below I am going to write something different,
From 1 to 3.4.5...........…6,
I know my poem will not catch reviews,
I want to say that I love you,
I want a knife to say ,
I will not Say okay,
Ok if you are insisting I have to say,
That line number 1 to 3 is for
five ,
Please left a note if you are virtually alive

Reviews

[Andy Robinson]

Really great poem, it hits a steady beat throughout with some great phrases! Great work!

[writ rajat]

thanksaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[LKBillips]

Silly and fun. Nice little piece. :)

[William Richards]

I enjoyed it good work :)

[B]

The comedian is always the first one to get killed off
Whether he is in love
or just trying out that mic
Testing 1,2, 3
he gets shoed off
sucks

I liked the satire here

[writ rajat]

Thanks .....

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[Krutika]

Nice. Read something refreshing!
And laughed too! 😁

[writ rajat]

Nice one to know thanks

[Priyanshi]

Yeah, it was funny, keep it up.

[Sofia]

Hahaha it was indeed funny. Well written and yeah you made me laugh. Keep writing :)

[writ rajat]

THANKS..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................YOU

[Weeping willow]

Interestingly funny;-]--- HA!HA!

[writ rajat]

Thanks ......

[Mr.Writer]

Lol, haha! It was indeed a funny, light hearted poem!
Well done, keep it up :)

[writ rajat]

Thanks .........