The childhood in poverty

To every poor in poverty ,

Every night and day ,
Dreaming dreaming dreaming,
For food our children ,
Screaming screeming screeming,
The joy of life is far way,
For Basic​ necessities we are,
Struggling struggling struggling.,
Yesterday I was hungry,
Today my wife is hungry ,
Today I have to eat,
Because tomorrow poverty will beat me,
Life will cheat me,
Once a thought come why don't I cheat life ,
Then there will be no difference between life and me,
The main thing look at my daughter walking like a model,
Only one thing she can do,
Dreaming dreaming dreaming
Life is name of hide and seek game,
My inability make me a poet
I am writing on behalf of my poor uncle who live in front of my bungalow

Reviews

[Psychotic Lily]

I remember the children who beg for alms in the streets. After a day of begging under the scorching sun they'll scavenge like animals in trashcan for anything that can be eaten... and words are all I can give since I too have nothing else to offer.

Such a wonderful poem that touches the hearts and opens the mind.

[writ rajat]

Thanks alot it means alot

[TheUnrulyWriter]

Beautiful poem. You and your family will be in my thoughts during meditation. Your words always manage to touch my heart.

[writ rajat]

It was my imagination

[TheUnrulyWriter]

Well that's a relief! However, poverty is still an issue and your poem has brought it back to my mind. Sometimes I get so caught up in my own life, I forget to look around me!!

[Surya]

It's heartfelt poem for me...Sometimes life hits us, but we have to fight....I loved it..:)

[Prashant Bajpai]

this one really too good it was a soul speaking poem

[L.C. Jarrette]

this piece is emotional...i'll pray for you

[Mr.Writer]

Delivering the message, adding a sense of creativity, and the repetition...
All done really well!
Keep it up

[writ rajat]

Thanks writer

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[duff]

Piercing writing that grabs the readers attention. Emotionally stirring and heartfelt to the bone. You did a nice job.

[Priyanshi]

You took a nice topic to write over it...and it is so heart touching poem... I really loved it...thanks for sharing wonderful piece.

[Shy Joe]

Very unselfish of you. A lot of times I forget how good I really have it. I believe most of us do, living here in the U.S.

I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Sofia]

A really gud theme to write on...it was wonderful..jst that in the 6th line...I think it should be " For basic necessities we are "...other than that it is nice..

[writ rajat]

Tanks of thanks

[Sofia]

Hahaha!! My pleasure!