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The potential,
Is very essential,
To live with harmony,
To achieve success so many,
Poems are for minds,
The Lotus is for money ,
Poetry is for humans,
Not for animals ,
The main point,
Is pain in your joint,
older you are getting,
God is doing settings,
scintillation of eyes,
Come alive when we cry,
The redness of cheek,
Shower only eyes seek,
Dimple is simple,
Covered with pimples,
This make it unique,
With age we are getting weak.
Getting serious and meek,
The odour of simplicity reek,
To most of us ,
Transportation is bus,
The level of balance ,
In trembling vehicle,
Life's semblance,
Is ambulance ,
Mental bank,
Is always blank,
Even if high in rank,
When the almighty appears,
From it's power your soul disappear,
The main applicant,
Ah thanks ,
To know,
To show ,
The reality,
In a row,
Truth is crow,
And sorrow,
To & fro,
Dashing cow,
Always meou,
How,
Are you ,
With ,
Your crew
Blink with blank,.
Tears full of tank

Reviews

[LKBillips]

It felt like the start of an engine. Sputtering at first then I could feel the pistons moving faster and faster as it went along. Interesting flow. :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Writ Rajat,
From the reality of " live in harmony" to "the lotus is for money" contrasts of life basics beautiful.
Then, "God is doing settings," and "come alive when we cry." You are giving inner truths.

Things become much more sobering;
"Life semblance.....ambulance"..."mental bank..always blank."
We are all living from one level of life reality to the next.
Great poem! Thanks for writing.
Kathy

[Krutika]

Wow! It was like a zigzag puzzle for me that didn't make sense as individual pieces but put together it forms a wonderful art with much depth to it :)
Good work 👍

[Psychotic Lily]

Good write. Keep writing!

[Priyanshi]

A good write....I must say...keep it up, friend.

[writ rajat]

Thanks dear

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[APOORVA]

this is an extremely captivating one!

[writ rajat]

Thanks any mistake you find

[APOORVA]

grammar is another thing, I generally look for emotions and I found plenty of them.
You can check out the grammar though

[writ rajat]

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