The Review- ultimate goal

Reviews are the writers ultimate goal, so I am going to write a line on reviews

REVIEW SAYS -Oh! lovely writer in your life I am not new ,

it doesn't matter whether you have me more or few,

 WRITER SAYS- For having you ,

I have to collect my thought's dew,

oh my dear Review ,

give me some better clue,

you and me are critical friend ,

so many praises we have lend,

never bring our relationship to an end,

Reviews says-  we are better half of each other,

we will reach our goal together,

for me you are ultimate goal,

for you I am ultimate goal,

the difference is only that i am dead,

and you have soul,

writer says - No no no,

you can become a truth crow,

the reason behind my success is you, you and only you,

never left me alone oh my dear review,

and thanks you all my reviewer

Reviews

[Manasa.L]

Good relation with the writer and the review in the lines here. Thank you for sharing

[Gee]

Reviews are all well and good but when written simply for a return review or written full of false praise, then they really ain't worth the paper written on.
I like the idea behind this

[writ rajat]

yeah you grabbed it righly

[Sofia]

I liked it! It was very good! Cheers to your creativity! And thank you for sharing :)

[writ rajat]

Thanks chears

[barleygirl]

The beginning intro line to your poem suggests that we all feel the same way about reviews. But then you go ahead & write a poem that's quite unusual & it expresses ideas & feelings that are NOT as common amongst writers as you might think -- or at least it feels like a surprising approach to reviews to me! I like it when a writer has something unexpected to say about something we are all familiar with, so good job on originality & creativity! The idea of talking back & forth with an inanimate object is original & well done.

[writ rajat]

THANKS DEAR BARLEY GIRL

[Surya]

Haha, that's a great connection between a writer and a review, and you woven a story out of it...I enjoyed it...:)

[writ rajat]

thanks you deAR SIR

[Surya]

Was my pleasure and am no Sir..:)