Suicide of farmers

this poem is based on the increasing number of farmers suicides in India

oh farmer don't do that,

because of you I can sit

on dining  table and eat,

just I cannot eat any more ,

the number of time I put my fingers into my mouth

to finish one time meal is very smidgen in comparison to number of deaths,

I cannot understand how frood people eat, eat and eat,

possibilities are that the person who grow grains may have died,

how can we keep them in the very very side

let us contribute let us sell our suit boot ,

to finish their dues from the root,

god will not forgive us for not taking it seriously,

they have also ate their grain when they were in avatars,

why are they dying continuously,

i hate government i hate democracy,

until they stop doing so much hypocrisy,

Reviews

[duff]

Another one of the unsung heroes of the world. Taken for granted by the minute with expectation. I like the topic choice and you did a really nice job driving home the importance of the subject matter.

[Pete]

special salute to the hard working farmers who feed us. bless them one and all. powerful words.

[writ rajat]

Nice to hear it

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

Your words ring true. May they ring loud for all to hear. This poem is bold and brave. We must always question those in power that their hearts are in the right place or if they have one. Thank you for sharing
and God Bless

Sheer Terror

[Manasa.L]

Every human on this planet must salute to the farmers, without them we wouldn't be able to enjoy variety of meals and survive.
It is so sad every time I see TV a news flashes that 'another farmer died of debt'. Why is this happening? Our government just speaks big words of abolishing poverty, let them first save the farmers.
Their words cannot change anything only their work, actions and a little humanity can do something in this matter. I hope they will understand or else there wouldn't be any farmers left.
My friend you have shown true emotions and feelings in your poem. Great writing, thanks for sharing...

[writ rajat]

You are right dear very nice to see your emotion and concern you are right please send read request of this poem to your indian and foreign friends plleeaassee

[Manasa.L]

Sure......:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes, I am afraid it is a fact that modern democracy does not always benefit everyone. Smehow we don't always appreciate those we should appreciate most.
Your poignant poem says so much
good for you.

[barleygirl]

Thank you for sharing this tidbit of social commentary to help us (who don't hear of such issues in India) understand what's going on there. You've done a good job of showing the situation thru imagery, & showing intense feelings of unfairness, which kind of parallels how it is here in the USA with people who've lost the jobs of coal-mining, factory-work, etc. when so many new jobs require technical knowledge & training these days. Your word picture of the dire situation is quite unforgettable. Thanks for sharing the understanding of this problem.

[writ rajat]

thanks you so much dear i love your review

[Stacy Purvis]

Hellz yea. Passion, raw, emotion, taking a stance, truth...it's all there

[writ rajat]

thanks you

[Richard simpson]

Good read, I love the tone and the message about how we shall respect the farmer and not take them for granted. But, to appreciate and symbolize them as heroes of the common man. I love it. Good job!

[writ rajat]

thanks any mistake you find in it

[Richard simpson]

Just the last line in it that at the end should have a period everything else looks good.

[Surya]

Farmers, what could I say everything is explained here, let's do our good to them, that's all I can ask for every individual...
Thank you Rajat for sharing the emotion..:)

[writ rajat]

thanks bro i hope you like it

[Surya]

Yeah, I did..