the culprit

this poem is dedicated to my love nature whom people used to kill everyday

Thanks dear ,

for making it clear.

that you are the reason

for my tears,

one thing i want to tell you,

my past was green and blue,

please don't be so rude,

be sagacious and frood,,

i am being destroyed rood by rood,

the matter of fact

is that i am becoming weak,

and you are becoming fat,

surrender your gun ,

be fit and run,

because i am getting old ,

and you are still young,

don't fire the gun which is in my front ,

i have some leaves,

i have some fronds,

ornis is still flying ,

and now i am dying,

i was green not any groid,

why are you killing me 

ooh ! racist with your gun named android,

be a linchpin not any gormless,

don't make me so much formless,

let me know the cause.

Author's Note

thanks if you are a nature lover leave a word

Reviews

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Rajat,

You have penned an excellent expression of the reality that all men need to be conscious of the impact we are capable of having upon our home world, this planet … We need to meticulously the use our Earth's natural resources in full view of such usage's end results, something that, for many years, we have failed to do … At the same time, when the realization of any problem arises to our attention there are always those who seek to use our concerns and our fears to their own advantage: i.e., Globalism's Climate Change … I am currently working on an article (A Noblest Of Globalist's Play On Words) in which I address the fallacies contained within the information presented to the peoples of the world, in regards Climate Change and its causes, that is more alarmist propaganda than it is factual evidenced and substantiated proven reality … Am I taking liberty with the truth, here, or the facts? … Let us ponder thoughts of the past, ancient history in fact … It is said there was an Ice Age … Where is that Ice Age today? … Where was man at that precise point in history, aside from huddled in shivers within a darkened cave holding his hands over a tiniest of fires? … We can no more answer the question of why there is no longer an Ice Age, than we can answer the question as to why there are no longer dinosaurs … What we do know, that is blatantly and intentionally being overlooked and swept under the rug of knowledge, is that if man was present during the time of the Ice Age, or during the time of the dinosaurs, it is relatively safe to assume that his impact upon the climate of his domicile locale were totally and indisputably insignificant, non-consequential, and nonexistent … So what happened to the Ice Age? … Where did it go? … Obviously, the Earth underwent a natural course event of Climate Change, and that without the polluting, natural resources-consuming, hand of man to bring such Climate Change about … Whatever events actually caused the end of the Ice Age, we should be seeking out similar causes now, first and foremost, before condemning man as guilty of damages to the Earth's Climate that he may well NOT BE responsible for, whatsoever … Excellent writing, my friend …

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn

[writ rajat]

Thanks now I am working on a topic student committing suicide

[barleygirl]

I am very much a nature-lover, living near a wilderness in the middle of nowhere (California). I love the artwork, which is a stunning way to depict the way we're destroying earth & nature at an alarming rate, may as well be killing with a gun. Your rhyming beat sounds like it could be a "rap" song . . . it's not easy to craft extended rhymes & you've used some unusual words to get there. I much prefer this to the use of everyday simple rhyming with all the common overused words. Some of your rhymes are a little bit of a stretch, but it's still better to have to think while reading. Your expressions are imaginative & original, even tho this is a much-written-about topic.

[writ rajat]

Thanks dear for making it clear

[Alice Maria]

Great imagery. I just have one question. What does rood mean?

[writ rajat]

Half of one acre

[Alice Maria]

Oh thanks.

[Weeping willow]

Wonderfully expressed poem, love the words and how they flow;-]

[Poetic License]

LOVE. LOVE. LOVE. I love the imagery you present here. Most powerful for me is the last line, "let me know the cause." This places nature in an even more vulnerable state - suffering without knowing the reasons.

[writ rajat]

Thanks you dear you are also powerful with your words

[Hiru]

Wow. A beautiful poem. Loved reading it.! I am a nature lover so it touched my heart.! Nicely written. Keep it up.!

[writ rajat]

thanks you so much hiru dear

[Manasa.L]

A very meaningful poem, the nature itself has spoken for itself through your words. Nice....enjoyed it.

[writ rajat]

Nice to read this

[Scerina Elizabeth]

Dayum, that was deep and beautifully written. Well done and I loved it :)

[writ rajat]

What is dayum thanks

[Scerina Elizabeth]

sorry pardon my slang it means WOW and I really enjoyed reading your poem

Your welcome

[Richard simpson]

I love this poem! It's greatly worded and has a good message to it. Good work. I hope to read some more of your work later. Thank you for recommending this to me I love it.

[writ rajat]

which word is great

[Richard simpson]

Every single word in it is great. I loved it all my friend.

[Surya]

Am nature lover, that was good, rascist it might be....I enjoyedd..:).

[writ rajat]

Thanks you