mushair

jubaan to khol,
najar to mila,
jawab to de,
mai kitni baar loota hu hisaab to de,
teri badan ki likhavat me bahot hai utaar chadhaav,
main kaise padhunga mujhe kitaab to de,

har jakhm me wo jakhm kaha jo humare dil me hai,

mere jism ki utni kimat kaha jo tumhare khane ke bill me hai,

Reviews

[Surya]

Anger tone..
Well penned...I enjoyed..:)

[Manasa.L]

Lol nicely written enjoyed reading it, good writing.

[Mayank Chaudhari]

Well written. Mostly this line 'mai kitni baar loota hu hisaab to de.'