oh feminist

feminist are much needed in Indian villages

The roads are full of men,

no one can see any women,

doors are built for them to open and shut ,

living whole day alone in huts,

feminists!

stop doing your service only in city,

come to our place and show your pity,

become aware of this surrounding ,

become aware of their fate ,

empower them so that they can cross the gate,

feminists!

where are your sympathy 

where are your grace ,

even where are you come to my villages ,

and free them from the extreme patriarch cages,

freedom is something which is liked by both gender,

at least them let them know about their rights,

because you are not Alexander 

Reviews

[LKBillips]

Love your message. True and necessary.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Very good keep writing
Enjoying your poems

[drob]

Beautifully stated, highlights the divide existing in a "unified" whole.

[TheUnrulyWriter]

Wonderful poem! I hope your ideas spread and help many women to have the equality they are entitled to!!!

[Surya]

Yup, I do agree with you my friend, freedom, rights are made for humans not for gender...
I enjoyed...:)

[Rojas]

Women need allies, men to stand behind them. Or even open the door and inviting them out.

Recognizing the need the first step. Nice call to action.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Hey Heather ... did you not know that behind every successful man, there is a woman! We do not need men to stand behind us!

[Rojas]

Allies always important. Plus sometimes men just need a reminder that they can be part of the solution.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yeeers, I see what you mean!!!!!

[Rojas]

Glad to hear it. I think the poet is male, so it was a nudge...☺️

[Great Aunt Astri]

Oh, now I see clearly! Yes, men are definitely part of the solution!

[Lydia Shutter]

Women are in all kinds of positions in the working world these days. Hopefully this will spread to your part of the world soon. lydi*

[Mr.Writer]

Soo creative! Seriously, great job!

[writ rajat]

thanksssss you

[Manasa.L]

Wonderful thoughts. You spoke for them who need the feminists to look at them. Good work, keep writing.

[writ rajat]

THANKSS YOOUUU

[Sonakshi Arora]

A lovely thought and a beautiful write!

[writ rajat]

THANKSXS YOU