Anti- Romeo squad

``it is a decision taken by honorable chief minister of Uttar Pradesh to tackle eve teasing cases,

Romeo was a person who love one girl,

uske mohabbat karne ka aaj yeh hua hai fal,

 people started defaming him by calling him a flirt,

issi liye mathura ki police ne kiya hai high alert,

couples who are spending their mesmerizing moment,

yeh IPC ka ban gaya hai bahut bara component,

doing love is not a crime but showing love is a crime,

  

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

Mesmerizing moment? Oh, I see. And bara component? Is that you first language too?
And flirt....high alert? Am I reading too much into your poem? Eve teasing cases? Yes, I think she certainly was teased! Very good perception. Lovely poem (I think)

[TheUnrulyWriter]

Great poem!! I love the part where you criticized comparing Romeo to flirts. Flirtatious people get called Romeo all the time, but Romeo was much more than flirtatious, he was a loyal partner who gave his life for his love.

[TheUnrulyWriter]

I must also add that I love how you mixed the two languages. I can't actually understand Hindi (I think that the language used), but I would like start studying it maybe next year. It really adds culture and a personal touch to you writing!!

[writ rajat]

If you want to understand it I can help you

[TheUnrulyWriter]

I would love to understand it, if it's not to inconvenient!

[Stacy Purvis]

True Love is never a crime and fault is not with Love nor the Stars, but with mankind.
Beautiful read.

[writ rajat]

Thanks you

[Stacy Purvis]

😊😑😃
You're welcome.

[Krutika]

That was some mesh of Hindu and English. But it does convey the message. A touch modern. Good experiment with the languages.

[writ rajat]

Thanks youuuuu

[duff]

This is great! Love the title:)

[Mr.Writer]

So cool! Lol nice job! :)

[writ rajat]

Have you understand it fully mr.writer any language problem

[Mr.Writer]

Nope , not really any problem :)

[Paradox]

Anti- romeo squad...... Its name is an insult of Shakespeare. UP CM must take an initiative to change it. Nice poem. The transition of languages seemed awesome

[Manasa.L]

:):)You know it is how it happens in India. No wonder it is a crime for them. Nice!

[writ rajat]

thanks dearrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

[Surya]

Hahaha, well I cant say any word on this..that's how people are...

[writ rajat]

thanks brooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo