Shayari

a piece of art

Raaton me bulakar labon pe mitha jehar de diya ,
Karrakti thand me bhi garmi ka lahar de diya,
Hum bhi the Badshahi ke badshaah,
Unko badle me pura shahar de diya,.,,,,

jindagi me kabhi ye na kehna 

ki maine koi kahar de diya ,

mastana ko kya pata ki humne apna mohar de diya,

kya khoob tha wo lamha lamha jo humne yuhi gujaar diya,

mittha tha wo jahar tumne badle me jaan hi le liya

Reviews

[APOORVA]

killed. nailed
वाह, बहोत खूब

[Surya]

a smile on my face now, I honestly appreciate your shayari,
"kya khoob tha wo lamha lamha jo humne yuhi gujaar diya,
mittha tha wo jahar tumne badle me jaan hi le liya"
true indeed, hahaha, I loved it..:)

[writ rajat]

Nice to know you glad

[Manasa.L]

masha allah! huzoor kya khoob likha hai. Ek mastane ki zindagi, sach me manna padega aap se koi mukabla nahi kar saktha.

[writ rajat]

Thanks you so much hujoor Ji bas apki duaaon PE kaayam hai jindagi

[Manasa.L]

waah! kya baath hai, logon ki dil jeethna koi aapse seekhe.

[writ rajat]

LOGO KE DIL BEHLANA KOI APSE SEEKHE

[Manasa.L]

Shukriya...:)