A story

Ove with L Missing

This story is about  a story of the  story,

one day a thinker was sitting beside a tree,

he was in deep thought because he was free,

at that time the art of story-telling was not developed,

he was filling up his mind's envelop,

 suddenly a dream came to his eyes,

in which there was a sun rise,

because he was not so wise ,

he assumes that it is a moon,

people started gathering ,

because he was murmuring ,

someone said the man is a preacher,

because he had some common feature,

he was murmuring what he had seen in the dream,

people from then call it story

Reviews

[LKBillips]

Good Job. I liked the idea. Keep them coming. :)

[Hiru]

I love this one.! It's quite interesting to read.. And it has a cool idea..It's good.

[Lydia Shutter]

Interesting story. Lydi*

[writ rajat]

2=2 thanks

[Alice Maria]

I really like this poem. Good job and keep on writing.😄❤❤👏👏👏

[Mr.Writer]

I really like this poem!! :) Very flowing and blended. The rhymes also make sense to some extent, but can be improved :)
Keep it up!

[Paradox]

Nice imagination about how prose came into being. Rythm is appreciable.

[Manasa.L]

Its nice how story originated. Nice rhythming. Thanks for sharing, enjoyed it.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

finally, i found someone from my hometown.
well, for the poem, it's a poem of a prose.
rhyming structure is fair.
try using better words as substitutes so that it's pleasant to read.
fantastic! keep writing!

[writ rajat]

which town you live

[writ rajat]

thanks for compliment i live in patna and you in up

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I'm from P####, even though I've never lived there long.

[Mayank Chaudhari]

Well rhymed.. Nice... You've nice grip on words. 👌

[Surya]

sometimes it rhymed, and you in your way provided an answer how story was started...I liked it..:)

[writ rajat]

Thank
Bro I appreciate

[Surya]

You are welcome..:)

[writ rajat]

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