I love your poems...............! not you.

it is a true incident which is happened today

today i was standing in library,

a room which is very scary,

with some librarian i was talking,

my appearance there was temporary,

so i was in  hurry,

a girl with curly hair ,

came to room for having a chair,

my eyes got stunned,

my heart was having fun,

as her steps directed towards me,.

the glass of my eyes started developing dew.

she proclaimed to whole students,

i love your poems........not you

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Interesting.....I liked it. ☺

[Tazeen Ahmed]

wonderful and humorous except for some tiny errors.
avoid using too many'.......'

"the glass of my eyes started developing dew."
VERY WELL.

[Mayank Chaudhari]

Hehe.. Awesome line.. "I love your poems.. Not you". Mere sath Hua hai.. 😁

[writ rajat]

nice to hear

[MaryKC]

I don't know how you actually felt about this incident, but it is told in a humorous way, but she sounds quite rude. This poem is wonderful! I enjoyed this very much.

[writ rajat]

Thanks it's actually a dare to survive thanks u

[Ana B.]

haha, well that looked like an awkward situation. Love the irony and the style of this :)

[writ rajat]

That girl look like you

[Ana B.]

huh, not sure how to take that

[writ rajat]

What to take

[Papaya]

Ha, yeah... The life of a poet.
How true that is.

[writ rajat]

thanks have you gone through this too

[Papaya]

Not quite the same but I hear it happens a lot

[writ rajat]

okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

[Krutika]

Haha.. It was fun. I like your style of writing. :)

[writ rajat]

your comment made my day,
now i can stand and say
this is my day

[Krutika]

Good to know👍

[Manasa.L]

You will find another girl bro don't worry, it happens. The poem is good. Nice:)

[writ rajat]

that's true thanks for the reviews

[Sofia]

Hey! I guess this is my very first review to your poem. Well the poem was good and I'm sorry for whatever happened.

[writ rajat]

Not to worry and don't be sorry

[Surya]

Oh she said that, sorry, ok coming to your poem sounded and versed well...:)

[writ rajat]

its fun to hear everyone saying sorry do not feel sorry i am open minded person