The Hole

Hole play a vital role in life how? let us see!

Life is a boat,

in the ocean of time 

it is  an opportunity to float

the boat is made of metal ,

in this you have to settle,

plethora of obstacle will come in your way,

in the form of ice-berg or mountain,

you have to tackle all 

with the confidence's sun ray,

now the hole ,

what is its role ? 

in the metal boat there is a hole,

it determine your age ,

all the situations and life's phase,

i would like to tell you,

never go on race.,

never direct your boat in the wrong ways .

may be there a cyclone,

bigger the hole larger the responsibility ,

bigger the hole slower your pace

Author's Note

thanks you always smile

Reviews

[Cara]

Amazing and so very true
thank you for sharing

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Indeed life is a journey with obstacles and reliefs.
"plethora of obstacle will come in your way,

in the form of ice-berg or mountain,

you have to tackle all

with the confidence's sun ray,"
I like the rhyming structure.
Keep writing!

[writ rajat]

thanks dear fellow writer

[duff]

The challenges that nature and the elements present are always out there. Daring us to persevere. Unpredictable moments a constant in life. I like your perspective and thoughts. Nice job

[writ rajat]

thanks you veeeerrry much

[duff]

Very welcome:)

[Shannon]

Interesting way to view challenges.

Thank you for sharing.

[Manasa.L]

Wonderful how you have accompanied life with a boat sail. Nice. :)

[writ rajat]

Thanks yooooooou

[Cat]

Absolutely lovely :) great use of rhymes

[writ rajat]

Any grammatical mistakes you see tell me

[Surya]

Comparision was apt., and true.....it's good and I liked the way you described...

[writ rajat]

nice dear thanks for the comments