Lovinology

A type of subject in class life related to love......,,,

Welcome to the class of lovinology,,..
it's not a physics,chemistry and biology,
its related to love,,,
there were many member in this club..
the motive of this subject,
to spread love and loving object,
lets begins with what is love?,
who are current and ex-love?,,
the reason of doing love,
the prison of loveteria,
place of lover and loving area,
so sorry!  the class is over,
for all the lover,,
we meet in next class ,
till then you spread love flash.

Reviews

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Sounds just wonderful. great imanigenery and great poem. Well done

[Perkele.7885]

Ah! Lovinology! High marks for topic. Not so great marks though for your grammar. Low marks here. The use of commas properly, short connecting words(ex. is, the, etc.) pluralization miscues, (is this a class or a club), some Capitalization is called for perhaps. Now this is free verse and I love free verse but, in this type of poem one needs to break up the poem into complete phrases to keep the poems flowng smooth for the reader. A little work and you would not have been far off here.
Writ Rajat-- grammar is not always easy, esp. in English. Your poem was unique!

[writ rajat]

thanks I appreciate your comment

[kitty]

Cute idea :) I'd come to this class!

[writ rajat]

you have to give your heart to someone as fees

[Rachelle]

scratching my head on what to say to this one but it made me laugh…..
ok! It's spontaneous and whimsical!

[writ rajat]

thanxxx you very much

[Saddam]

so sorry! the class is over,
for all the lover,,
we meet in next class ,
till the you spread love flash.

Interesting. Your class is so preety. Just fell in Love.

[writ rajat]

thanxx student you must try