What is love????????????

love is something which can be seen, touched and felt by a lover

Whenever I see you,

my eyes become magnet.

Whenever you see me,

you closes your eyes.

Whenever I talk to you,

I become dumb.

Whenever you talk to me,

your mouth become speaker,

Whenever I touch you,

you become electrons.

Whenever you touch me 

I become washroom cleaner,

From the time of our meeting,

I become mad,

so this worried my mom and dad,

thanks you for making me mad,

at least I do not make you sad,

 Oh! my reader"' Is this love""

Author's Note

Answer me

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

Writ, what you are experiencing is probably not love but, it is an awareness that you are finding many acute pleasures about the opposite sex that more than likely, you were immune to or you overlooked before. I do not know your age but, let's call the subject matter of this poem a step forward into the 'coming of age'! What Is Love? You will know when it is upon you as you will think of little else as it is that powerful an experience. Good Luck as you continue to write and pay more attention to your grammar!

[writ rajat]

I m 18 years old I have not even experience the love

[Coyote Poetry]

"thanks you for making me mad,
at least I do not make you sad,
Oh! my reader"' Is this love"""
Being angry and confuse does mean love. When someone never leave your thoughts. This is true love. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[writ rajat]

Why you are thanking me I am very proud to my self after having your review

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm thanking you for sharing the poem with me.

[Cryingkate]

I'm not sure,
but you made me giggle with this line :
Whenever you talk to me,
your mouth become speaker,

reminds me of myself :-)

[writ rajat]

Can I ask how

[Cryingkate]

Well when Gary talks to me, I become speaker...

I giggled cause talking like a speaker to me relates to talking to much and sorta on the noisy side :-)

[writ rajat]

Who is gary

[Cryingkate]

My Mate :-)

[writ rajat]

Thanxs for your comments

[Cryingkate]

Thank you it was my pleasure and enjoyed your poem.
Thank you for writing it and sharing.

[writ rajat]

Really you like this poem of a nonentity writer like me.

[Cryingkate]

Non Entity? Who says? Every word from every person is of utter importance !
Each person is on their own journey and every word has a meaning to someone , somewhere.
Words are everything and everyone on their own journey needs them.
Not everyone needs the same words, But for those that do it is a blessing.

Every word you write will mean something to someone.
Please don't underestimate the power of your words.
That day I read your poem , I needed that. And because you wrote it, I was able to find it when I needed it.
Write from your heart and you will always be doing the right thing and those that need it, They will find it.
Keep up the good work my Writing friend.

[writ rajat]

Thanks you for your wonderful reply that make me well encouraged to write my next stuff I am going to steal your thought to develope it in poem can i ?

[writ rajat]

According to your question my family member call me non entity

[writ rajat]

Your reply come like the jesus

[Cryingkate]

You may expand upon any thought at anytime anything I share. Thats what we are here to do. Share thoughts and weave ideas back and forth. Even one word can help someone take the thought to another space etc.... See writing isn't about who can write the best. It's really about helping each other grow in thoughts and grow in higher thoughts.
Together we are a whole thought all done in bits and pieces.
watch how the writers will go thru periods of writing about different things at the same time.
See we are sharing thoughts like branches of a tree and together we are one Tree....

HA see Coyote shared about trees today and now I see and speak about trees and branches.

You keep wriiing FRiend and don't listen to the lies of being a non Enity. That is ignorant of them to say.
I am sorry they do that.
Stick here with us and keep writing. You are needed here. MAke us your family and share with us and we will share in return.
In case no one told you today, I just wanted to say on behalf of Writers Cafe LOVE YOU and WELCOME HOME :-)

[writ rajat]

Thanks you very much

[Cryingkate]

Thank You ! send me a message in case I m in it when your next one is posted :-)

[Cryingkate]

Humm that's was really one huge typo blooper I wrote. I meant to write. Let me know when your next write is done. So in case I miss when you post it.

[writ rajat]

I will send you read request

[Cryingkate]

Thank you , Happy Joyful, writing :-)

[writ rajat]

Oooooookkk

[Ahena MK]

well written !!! :)
job well done ..
ahena

[writ rajat]

thanxx you

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well Writ it certainly sounds like love.You penned this very sweetly :)

[writ rajat]

thanks yu very much