Child marriage

Its a true event happened in my life recently.I am against the cavalcade of child marriage happening in my country.It is indispensable to having your supports so please share this poem.

In my village I attended a marriage,

at the age of full enjoyments,

she was given a bondage.

when I went near the stage ,

then my heart press a break.

I cracked after seeing that the bride was crying,

I know that  I can't do anything,

but I am committed to do anything,

for bringing smile on her face,

I pick up my bike and get on a race.

At first I reached police station,

for my purpose I have limited duration.

While I am filing the F.I.R.

I don't mind how gormless they are.

The time was less and work was more,

with three policemen I rushed to the door.

there I managed to stop this wedding

as the crowd started spreading.

In the mind of bride's father,

his daughter is a big  burden,

but in the reality she is a golden bird,

whenever she fly she can change the world.

Author's Note

thanks

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

It is wrong for parents to treat their children like property and a burden.To marry children is ludicrous in my mind and yet still they carry on this horrible tradition.You have expressed this well :)

[writ rajat]

i agree with your thought thanxx you very much

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Perkele.7885]

Marriage is a decision that should be made by the parties involved and not the parents or other family. It is and should well be the most important decision of a person's life as it marks a person's commitment to their own family throughout life! Good poem and a good message! Grammar!

[writ rajat]

thank you I appreciate your thought

[QuietlyCrash]

"His daughter is a big burden, but in reality she is a golden bird, whenever she fly's she can change the world"
I absolutely love this. There were some grammatical issues. Like in one place you should have said "I don't mind" not "I doesn't mind". But other than that this was a fantastic write. Thanks for sharing.

[writ rajat]

thanks you for your suggestion