Earth please stop............

Its a poem of lover

Earth please stop moving,

sky please fell down,

whenever your face,

do not reach my eye,

please Earth and sky.

Buds please stop opening,

sun please stop rising,

stars please stop twinkling,

I am very fond of your lustrous beauty.

 

Author's Note

its a short poem from my heart

Reviews

[jvava]

I think that you captured the beauty of nature well in this poem.
I am a bit confused, though. If you are fond of the sun's and star's and the bud's lustrous beauty, why do you want them stop opening and rising and twinkling? I'm just wondering.
You love nature, I can tell! And you love to write about nature, which is a good niche for you.
Good job! Keep writing.

[writ rajat]

Thanks you for your wonderfull commetnt after reading your comment my teacher said I am proud to be your teacher,so a heartiest thanks to you. its meaning is whenever i do not see the face of my lover i request sun to not rise rise

[jvava]

Oh, ok! You're welcome! Are you taking writing classes?

[writ rajat]

no i am studying in class 11 commerce stream in dr.d ram dav school

[jvava]

Ok! Is class 11 the highest class there is?