Speech as a bullet

its a great divine

whenever you speak,

actually you fire,

with a natural gun 'mouth',

it can hurts your listener desire.

it depend on you how much big gun you use,

once you fire it cannot be defuse,

you need to keep attention

whenever you speak,

it can bring someone in tension,

whenever you meek.

your language is your direction,

its  depend on your action,

whenever you speak,

actually you fire,

with a natural gun 'mouth',

it can hurts your listener desire.

Reviews

[Libby Carsons]

i love the concept of this poem! some great comparisons in this, but it may get a little repetitive in the ending?

[writ rajat]

thanks you for reviewing and i need your help in renovating it

[Prritiy]

a nice creation again, yes as it is said one should speak with caution.

[writ rajat]

thanks you

[Prritiy]

welcome :)

[QuietlyCrash]

"with a natural gun 'mouth',
it can hurts your listener desire"
Very well penned, I adore this.

[writ rajat]

thanks you