School life

this poem reminds you your school life

Keep your joys do enjoy,

take the time as a toy.

Everything is at place,

do not cry and disgrace.

You are in your enjoyment road,

which at the end have many ways,

you have to choose which is good and which is bad,

in which you feel good, happy and glad.

Your teacher is your traffic police,

your parents is your vehicle,

your driver is your brain,

you think how much you gain.

After finishing you must say,

what is the meaning of joys i don't know,

what is the meaning of time as toy i don't know

Author's Note

thanks for reading

Reviews

[jvava]

I like the purpose of this poem - to show how important education is. I love the metaphors and similies you used, they are very clever!
Your grammar could use a little work, though.
I loved it! Keep up the good work!

[writ rajat]

thanxx you

[zainul]

Great write.
Enjoyed reading.

[writ rajat]

thanx you