examination night

how i feel before exams

Next day is my exam ,

my mind is in a traffic jam.

When i  go to learn ,

i am fell in deep concern,

the concern is,

my father tell if you fail he can send me to a jail,

Examination is a confident war,

when you are declared pass you won a car.

when you fail you get only coffee bars

Reviews

[Prritiy]

Rajat you need to work a bit on your grammar that will make your write nice.

best wishes

[writ rajat]

thanx for advise and sorry for my foults

[Prritiy]

no need to say sorry, sometimes it happens
that poet on purpose writes the form he/she feels conveys what they wish, so the reader may also understand wrong :)

wish you all the best, keep on writing, and learning :)

[writ rajat]

thanks you

[Prritiy]

:)

[writ rajat]

thank you zoya for reading my poem

[Zoya]

u r welcome..

[Zoya]

actually true..
even my mind will be a traffic jam..
i liked the poem...
enjoyed:)