Loves Me?

Loves Me?

A Poem by Katherine Enma Pineapple
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A try at romantic poetry

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He loves me

He loves me not

Should I get my hopes up?

Is the answer no?

 

He loves me

He loves me not

Shall I give it a shot?

Just tell me if so

 

He loves me,

He loves me not,

I keep dreaming it up

Until the last petal comes

 

He loves me

He loves me not

I don’t want to believe in this but

I want to feel safe

 

He loves me

He loves me not

The last petals in my hands

I feel that I should stop

 

He loves me

He loves me not

He loves me

 

I stared at the petal

And back to the flower

 

He loves me not

© 2012 Katherine Enma Pineapple


Author's Note

Katherine Enma Pineapple
I'm not used to writing romance, and this has been a child of a puppy like crush. Nothing all too serious. But I see that what I wrote seems all too corny :/

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Haha ang ganda nito ah, kelan mo ginawa yan?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rhianne Ney

12 Years Ago

Adik talaga kayo, luma na yan it gives you "false hopes"
Katherine Enma Pineapple

12 Years Ago

kaya nga napaasa pa ako D: joke hindi masnadismaya dahil he loves me not ang lumabas D''':
Rhianne Ney

12 Years Ago

ahh, wawa ka naman
its also nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

12 Years Ago

thanks you
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Pax
not corny at all... you've bring light to the new flower trick of love...
i say this is brilliant write...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

12 Years Ago

awww thanks :3
nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

12 Years Ago

thank you >:3
Not corny at all!!!! More like....flowery. Is that a compliment? Becca says yes. It's cool how you keep repeating the lines that I think all of us girls have said at one point. Well, not cool but...different. Different and cool and flowery. For someone who isn't used to writing romance poetry I think you're pretty darn good. I'd give you two thumbs up if my wrist wasn't sprained. Not that that impedes the use of my thumb but....ok anyways.

So, just a recap: not corny; different, cool and flowery, good at writing romance poetry, and will get two thumbs up as soon as I can figure out how to portray that with letters; dinosaur shaped cookies are the bomb and I like to pretend that it's the end of the world when I bite their heads off.

P.S. I'm the first one to comment! That means I love your romance poetry the most!!!!!!
P.P.S. :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D Good write!!! :D :D :D :D :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Becca Bishop

12 Years Ago

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D .. read more
Becca Bishop

12 Years Ago

There. You deserve every single one of those smiley faces since you don't get two thumbs up :P Sprai.. read more
Katherine Enma Pineapple

12 Years Ago

somebody let you loose in a sugar wonderland didn't they? hahaha thankies X3 lol I hope that trucker.. read more

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