Amity Empire

Revised write

A place of never ending wonder

It’s an abode where you will wander

With endless childlike desire

The beautiful Amity Empire

 

May the queen be dressed flagrant

The atmosphere is truly fragrant

Here you can be deviant

The design of this world truly brilliant

 

Sit back and get your head in the clouds

Breathe in and let your mind about

Just close your eyes and without a doubt

Dream to enter as long as you’re devout

 

Author's Note

Can't resist logging in XD anyway the pic is a pic from my cam when I visited my great grandpa's grave. The poem is from my journal

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

I love the way of comparison and how you make it secretive and mysterious as always... happy november 1's day ^-^

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

hahaha thankies yan-yan >:D uhhh happy november 11?

[Rhianne Ney]

Ha?

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Sit back and get your head in the clouds
I would do that every day, if I could. I just can't get my head out of my evaluation exams but when I get the time to get my head in the clouds, it's such a great feeling. 100/100 I loved how u expressed yourself here, AMAZING poetry! :D

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Hahaha thanks exams really are...ugh.... :D anyway thank you for sharing. I love getting my head in the clouds, makes me feel free :) thank you for your wonderful review

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no prob! :D

[Pax]

Beautiful my friend...i like it...the pic seems familiar...is it somewhere part of bagio??

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Thank you kuya XDD it actually is... around at loakan airport, the heaven's garden private cemetery O.O don't freak k? it's really beautiful there

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful pic.Now I wanna go back to happynightnightdreamysleeps to enter. Is there a password? :-)

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Thank you it's actually the view of a cemetery so don't freak out O.O hahaha hmmm... I don't know... is there? ;D