A Favor I Ask

A poem for a dear friend I've lost

Hey you must have heard the news

She and I fought yesterday

But knowing her she won't survive another day

So I have a favor to ask you today

Can you please be by her side?

I can't because she wouldn't allow me to

Tell her everything's going to be alright

Tell her stay strong with all her might

Then give her these pack of cookies

Don't let her know that I baked them

Tell her that you did and not I

So that she wouldn't feel shy

Give her a cup of milk

It lightens her mood for a reason

And that's because when she was little

She'd have that as her grandmother cradles her

After that can you buy her a bowl of cherries

It would also make her happy and merry

Then as you do please wipe her milk mustache away

I know that she'd leave that astray

Then can you listen to everything she says

And tell her this to brighten her day

"The world isn't so cruel as you see

Because right now you have me."

Hug her as warm as you possibly can

She loves resting on somebody's shoulder

So I hope this won't be much a bother

She just couldn't stand me anymore

Author's Note

Be as critical as possible :) I'd want this to be perfect when I ask a favor for a dear friend of mine. Unfortunately, a one sided friendship.

Reviews

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Really enjoyed this as its a little bit different to the "norm".

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Thank you :) I like straying away from the norm, it gives me more things to write about and its more fun there :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Excellent read and write

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Thank you :D

[Irvette Dauphine]

like this.. dont know why, this is just flow smoothly and gently. make my feeling and mood calming down..
this is great :D

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

whoa didn't know it could do that XD thank you :D

[Pax]

as i read this it come differently in my perspective. Its like a love triangle, a person
gives way to a friend so that his friend would be happy..

and in the friend perspective you've done it really well. Its really sweet, if you really want to be friends again with this person, then show your intention in the
open, she would appreciate it than in the other person care.

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Thank you for the review and the advice :) I do try to show her but I don't see why she is bent on trying to remove me from her life. I asked her why and she wouldn't tell me :/

[Pax]

hmm..she's hidding something, i guess.

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

I hope she is for I can't bear the fact that I committed a big mistake again -sigh-

[Pax]

she's just hurt in the meantime. give her time and space, she'll come around when is ready.

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Thank you, I haven't thought of that :) I feel much better now

[Pax]

your welcome.

[Rhianne Ney]

uhh... loss of punctuation marks I guess...
This poem reminds me when I wished something like that but if you only hold one person dear you can't give her to someone who might not provide the same love and care which only you can give...
Relationships are important and there are times when you've to let go... But choices can also lead to your friendship's end...
Ask yourself: Do I really have to let go?
Anyway, good poem
I hope that friend you mentioned realizes the true meaning of you're friendship (;

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

-sigh- Problem is I can't let go of years worth of friendship... she wants me to go but I can't

[Rhianne Ney]

you just have to wait for her to realize what she lost

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

I suppose I would leave time to its wonders

[Rhianne Ney]

please do as you please