1. Another Day

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“Mom,” Lianne sobbed looking at the box her mother had left behind, “Where are you?”

 

She rested her head on her bed’s pillow, enjoying the comfort of the kingdom’s finest silks on her cheeks. Her eyes, surely the pinkest you have ever seen, were tear-stained. She was at her most delicate times. Why, if a whole kingdom should stare at you with the coldest stares you have ever seen could you possibly be still alright?

 

Sighing she wiped her tears with her hands and immediately sat up on her bed.

 

She should stop moping around already.

 

Lianne stood and stretched her limbs.

 

“One, two, one, two,” she mumbled as she rotated her arms around. With a huff she finished her stretching exercises and stared at her self at the mirror across her bed. It was tall, not tall enough to reveal the image of herself standing but enough to show her until the waist. It was screwed on to the wall. Honestly, if it wasn't then she would have removed it by now.

 

Her long brown hair was in a mess and her eyes a tad bit red, probably because she was recovering from her senseless crying. Her fair skin got quite a bit of a tan from yesterday’s wrestling match. Her endless tattoos, tribal in design, remained in tact though.  Her brows need a little trimming. She stared at her nails, not long but a tad bit dirty with small traces of dirt at the ends. She would cut those after her bath. She looked down and stared at her chest with dismay.

 

“Why you’re as flat as you can be,” she muttered and looked up at the mirror again

 

She clapped her hands together and brought a wide smile on her face.

 

“The girl at the end of the rainbow, no doubt; happy, strong and energetic would shout; Remember, it’s just another day in the kingdom!” she exclaimed. Now she walked to her dresser. She examined the contents. It was filled with what should be her father’s clothing. She wasn’t allowed to strut around in a skirt, in fear that her slender thighs might be exposed.

 

“Prince Roy!” noisy banging on the doors echoed in Lianne’s room. Said girl turned to the door then ignored it. “You are late! Your father will be mad!”

 

“He’s not here!” Lianne replied as she grabbed her clothes and headed to the bathroom.

 

“A maiden?!A maiden in the master’s room!” She heard the maid panic. She laughed and entered the bathroom setting her garments on the marble sink. She exited again when she heard repetitious banging on her doors once again.

 

“Prince Roy! Prince Roy!” Ah a familiar voice.

 

“What is it again?!” Lianne yelled.

 

“Please take your medicine! You sound like a woman!”

 

“I AM a WOMAN!” Lianne retorted

 

“Just hurry! The king wants you at the firing range!”

 

“Fine,” she mumbled and entered the bathroom with a sigh.

 

“Another day as Prince Roy,”

Author's Note

I would love critical reviews <3

Update:
Hahaha... Revised this :)

Reviews

[Tsukin Archangel]

oooooo i love this very original cant wait to see whre u plan to go with "prince Roy" lol Good start got nothing critical really...Hmmm OH there where some awkward phrases like:

"It was screwed on to the wall, most probably because her father had doubts that she would remove the damned thing and honestly she would do the said action."

It's a little wordy and convoluted I's write a possible way to write that one but i honestly dont really get the last bit and i dont wanna screw up the meaning lol

Anyway good start i intend to read more~

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Thank you :D No thank you for pointing that out. I had been debating with myself if I would change it or not. I have habits of having things too wordy :3

[Tsukin Archangel]

ah i c its not that bad lol just make sure ur wordiness is clear and Np :3

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

hahaha thanks I've got problems with my use of words you know? Don't know why but I do sometimes I'm a really hard person to talk to DX

[Tsukin Archangel]

its all good we all have our quirks i have awful like comma etc

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

lol I had that too XD damn commas

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol i apparently talk weird then if i have an abundance of commas

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

same same XD pshhh talking weird's normal now >:D

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol right? theres some Becausuth speech in a game i play everyone is adding UTH to words lol

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

loluth XD

[Tsukin Archangel]

oh lord not here too >;o lol

[Pax]

it was a fun read!
intrigue by the turn of events..

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Thank you XD I'm relieved it's interesting

[Pax]

yes it is...your welcome

[Rhianne Ney]

lolz

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

lol?

[Rhianne Ney]

lol

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

lololololololololol?

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I don't really have any critical reviews. Cause the beggining is great!=)

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Aww thanks :3

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You're welcome =)