My Eyes

I have been wondering about this ever since I was a little girl but then that little girl couldn't write can't she? So I wrote this at my ripe age of (LOL CENSORED)

Blind eyes see darkness
Closed eyes see nothing
Open eyes see tempest
Which one is the best?

Blind eyes cannot see
Their sight then is free
They can create beauty
But the beauty isn’t reality

Closed eyes see nothing
Not even a little something
They reject the light shining
And judge it to be threatening

Open eyes see the terrors
They see death and horrors
Yet they see life and honor
They see the evil and the savior

Which is the best, I wonder
Now that they’re brought asunder
Which one is mine, I ponder
Then I ask myself
-“Is this my correct answer?”

Author's Note

Since I have been on the net for a while let me tell you that this is available in writers-network and in deviantart

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

if a child would choose of course he would choose open eyes so he can see the world but if an adult would choose of course many would choose closed eyes because every one who had grown up already go to a stage called sadness
Good poem d:

[Hidden Happiness]

I think blind eyes are the best...one has no limits to his imaginations then....this was really a beautiful piece:-):-).!.

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Thank you though blind eyes aren't my main reason for this poem but rather closed eyes it's the second one I have thought of but thank you I appreciate the acknowledgement

[Hidden Happiness]

You welcome...n eye i thougjt about all the different aspects that you presented and i think its great when someone can do that cuz well ummm im lazy:-D:-P.

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

hahaha so am I XD my writing's at moods

[Hidden Happiness]

:-D

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

when ever i read this kind of poems i just get exited to write

Good work

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

thank you :)