Stuffed Animal

it turns out the other point of our 

triangle is worthy of more respect

than you.

don't dare misconstrue this reckoning

as a flattering plea.

walls rumble as they close in, don't 

worry--nothingness will survive.

the uniqueness of your scent, rapidly

signaturing fear--with nails bitten off

like sunflower seeds.

as your latest stuffed animal summons

the courage to come to life--just so it

can run away from you.

flawlessly repeating what it was taught.

Reviews

[Vol]

Onoma,
Above all, a poem must incite the reader to THINK. Success!
Some poems can stand strong on imagery alone. Success!
Must exhibit a strong voice, unique to the poet. Success!
Should be open to multiple interpretations. Success
And I LOVE the last line!
Vol

[Onoma]

I seriously appreciate how thoroughly you broke down the standout luminosities of my poem. Thank You for your consideration & encouragement Vol~

[Arundass TP]

Good writing. Enjoyed reading

[Onoma]

I'm glad you enjoyed the read Arundass--Thank You~

[Davidgeo]

If you have venom for something, that means it's worth it to You to kill.

[Onoma]

You could definitely extract venom from this poem--I'm grateful for its catharsis. Thanks for reading Davidgeo.

[Aila]

This is the ultimate thought-provoking poem, each line can be interpreted so deeply. I was hooked from the first line, the triangle symbol is amazing. Love this poem!

Sincerely,
Aila

[Onoma]

How awesome that you wandered around this poem & derived stimulation from it. Your enthusiastic support is greatly appreciated. Thank You Aila~

[Muse]

I personally forgot how to write. I have not been inspired for a very long time. But reading this remind me that even a ramble of thoughts with clever brevities can make for an enjoyable read. I loved this.

"with nails bitten off
like sunflower seeds"

Genius

[Onoma]

Wow...this is such a generous review, so timely as to what was a crappy day. I'm humbled Muse--Thank You~