Second That Motion

Second That Motion

A Poem by Onoma

What if the mirror you stare at suddenly
believed in you?
What would the world do with such a
belief?
Would it second that motion of such a Coming...or 
would you appear in each and every
mirror as belief?

© 2013 Onoma


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~ the Mahatma had said... "be the change you want to see"... and many wise and sensitive people say that we should "lead by example"... they also say "leadership is building leaders around one"... so, my guess is that if one pursues excellence in simply doing one's duty, then, one day, one will transcend one's context... and emerge as radiant as the Sun... ~ but i am not as radiant as the Sun so i don't know this by experience... yet every cell of my consciousness reiterates this more and more each day...

~ this is a brilliant piece, Sire... it has triggered a million thoughts in my mind... thank you for writing such an incredibly thought-provoking piece... you've given me a dose of inspiration i cherish and admire... i think this piece will lead me to a greater degree of authenticity in thought, word and deed...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

It is all good!



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Ive always thought that a mirrors reflection is different for each person like the mirror itself has its own view on you or a personality. Strange that this made me think of that good shtuff :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I like this a lot, it say so much in so little words. Very succint.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Coolest metaphysical write today!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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~ the Mahatma had said... "be the change you want to see"... and many wise and sensitive people say that we should "lead by example"... they also say "leadership is building leaders around one"... so, my guess is that if one pursues excellence in simply doing one's duty, then, one day, one will transcend one's context... and emerge as radiant as the Sun... ~ but i am not as radiant as the Sun so i don't know this by experience... yet every cell of my consciousness reiterates this more and more each day...

~ this is a brilliant piece, Sire... it has triggered a million thoughts in my mind... thank you for writing such an incredibly thought-provoking piece... you've given me a dose of inspiration i cherish and admire... i think this piece will lead me to a greater degree of authenticity in thought, word and deed...

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

It is all good!

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