can i ask a favor?

i thought i was strong enough for this

strong enough to bear through the pain

but im so weak i need a wish

a wish to be sane

 

i wasn't ready to be brought into life

im too weak to handle it

so please stab me with a knife

grab a candle and let it be lit

 

im not asking for death

im asking for tranquility

i'll take my last breath

and save the others the humility

 

 

 

Reviews

[Suki]

no you cant ask for anymore favors chongaaaa lol
but this is good! i like it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Such beauty and sadness in your words. Sometime we seem we can't win. But tomorrow will come. We get up and maybe if we are lucky. Things fall for a reason.
Coyote