THAT'S HATE!*

THAT'S HATE!*

A Poem by Aeon Starr
"

FOR ALL THOSE WHO ARE.........F*****G B******S!

"

WHATS THIS I FEEL?

HAPPINESS?

NO!

WHAT IS IT?!?

I KNOW I'VE FELT IT BEFORE!

THIS WARM TROPICAL FEELING!

SOMEONE HELP!

SOMETHING IS HAPPENING!

I'M SMILING!

WOW!

WHAT'S GOING ON WITH ME?

 

I KNOW!

IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT!

YOU DID THIS TO ME!

YOU LEFT ME

YOU LEFT ME SOME LIFE

YOUR WALKING AWAY LEAVING ME BLEEDING TO DEATH!

I'M SMILING!

 

HA!HA!HA!

I'M LAUGHING!

OH MY GOD!

I'M LAUGHING!

I FEEL A COLD RUSH DOWN MY CHEEK!

BUT THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE!

I DON'T KNO HOW TO CRY!

IS IT THAT MYTHICAL SAYING CALLED TEARS OF JOY?

 

IT PROBABLY IS AFTER TERMINATING!

TERMINATING ALL THE SADNESS AND SORROW!

 

I WOULD LIKE TO THANK YOU!

THANK YOU SO MUCH

FOR ENDING THIS AND LEAVING ME!

 

YOU F*****G B*****D!

THAT'S HATE!

 

 

© 2008 Aeon Starr


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Yeahh! You can feel the �lan in this one.

I somehow like it how she turns to the dark side, hope fading from her hart and the evil moving in.

It's a somehow ,,nice,, way of meeting your new dark side, and realizing that the sweet dream is over.

Then again� love could be still there ,ready to replace the hate, just as soon as the b*****d tries his game again.

A.M.




Posted 16 Years Ago


wow....that was good. keep it up

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

uh-pshhh LANGUAGE!!! LOL i take it this was one of your "GET IT ALL OUT" poems... very nice

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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