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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
That Girl

That Girl

A Poem by k.renee

Introduced by a 'boyfriend'
She was soft and gentle in the beginning
She made me relax a while
Captivating me and calling me
Her scent,just waiting for her to get ready
I'd hear her voice

She's a bad girl, humph
Her reputation, yeah I know it's bad
But I'm feelin her

You see, she summons
And people answer
Both young and old
Brown and white
Anytime, both day and night

Anticipating our time together
My body yearned to taste her
To feel her on my person
To have her in my presence
She made me see the moon
I used to love her
But then she turned hard

We messed around for a while
Became too acquainted
I grew to dislike her
She didn't care..she laughed,
She had me faded
Never loyal, she turned on me

Didn't matter that I'd forsook all for her
Didn't matter that I'd spent all to satisfy
Her insatiable need to be with me all the time
It didn't matter that I looked like a fool
So long as I kept it real for you,for you
           For You

Because in the end
It was me..you were gone
Alone
You broke me
I wish I'd never met you

But I damn sho' respect you



© 2010 k.renee


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Whew! I know what you mean ; "I damn sho respect you"....That's straight from the heart. You definitely keep it real.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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this has some passion and lots of emotion, gripping read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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k.renee

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Amazing write here.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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k.renee

10 Years Ago

Much obliged.
You are an awesome writer. I should have known. I'm joining this site.

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Added on July 31, 2010
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I'm a creative,restless spirit who will not find rest until I actually have something published.For many years now, I've toyed with the idea of writing and sharing my thoughts on paper. It's only been.. more..

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