drawn to you

i love someone and it's a very bad idea.

sometimes

as much as it can change,

in the end

it's all just more of the same.

so calculated, 

time changes night to day.

even the earth looks smooth

from far enough away.

Ropes fray to the fibers

they used to be.

tectonic plates converge,

then erode to the sea.

So why do I still let myself

feel abused

when confronted by the nakedness

of being confused?

Reviews

[JC]

very insightful, beautiful metaphor and a lyrical quality that would do well as a song...

[serpentine]

I've never thought of any of my writing as lyrical. Thank you for the idea, I may write some music for this!

[kharte]

I like the real emotion and I liked word choice the metaphors seem on point to where it's not too vague. All in all I really enjoyed it!