Bios Enigma

hahahahaha... Bios, Greek, meaning life.

Surrounded in the whirling of worlds,

Bombarded by the pains of all,

Yes I feel them, of boys and girls,

And yet I have fortification,

Rising up, up so tall,

The might of Heaven, birth of All,

Flows now through me,

Lead now the nations,

Through these dark times,

Not near a Saint, but a man.

But stand tall, proud,

How long have you been here?

Well probably, at the end,

It'll be thrice that.

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Marina]

Uh-may-zzinng.

I love the title. I love the structure...the flow.
The meaning.

Everything.
This is wonderful.
Awsome job!

XxStaySweet,
Rina

[beefjerky]

this is a splendid poem... sorta mysterious... (well i guess it's supposed to be since enigma means mystery)... i am not sure if i'm right but i believe ou're saying that god's always here to guard you, to help you when you need it...