Live your life to the fullest

Live your life to the fullest

A Poem by jyb333
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Fun little poem.

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Live your life to the fullest,

all these computers and games,

Are just invaders from space,

Here to steal and dissolve our brains.

 

Now hop off your stupid computer!

Pretend you're on a trip to planet Bombuter!

anything but that stupid computer.

 

Take a hike into your backyard,

Aww, c'mon! It's not that hard!

Just find something new to do,

(not that electronic woopdee-doo)

 

Jump off a cliff, or maybe even two,

Or try to find a size twenty-two shoe,

Maybe sail all seven seas blue.

 

Now hop off that stupid computer,

Yes, even though you almost got highscore one zombie shooter.

NO NOT FIVE MORE MINUTES!

Erm, or maybe just try to find a pet dog that can't be ant cuter.

© 2009 jyb333


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jyb333
The only childrens one I've ever written.

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I was fondly reminded of Dr. Seuss when I read this, and I absolutely positively without a doubt LOVE this poem. It has definitely earned a place in my favorites library. I think you have a knack for children's poetry. Let me know if you write some more, I would love to read it :)

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