Thinking of You

A short poem that came while... well while thinking of Her.

Standing by the flower bed,

Thoughts of you swimming through my head,

Just you and me, it's all I want,

Lonliness just isn't any good for me,

Walking hand in hand,

Reassuring, comforting, quick to stand,

Heading for the light at the end of the tunnle,

For love is the wine of life,

Sit, let's drink it thankfully,

as togetherness is the food of life,

Sit, let's eat.

Author's Note

please comment on what you think.

Reviews

[KisuKimmi]

in this line:
Thought of you swimming through my head,

you might want to change "thought" to "thoughts"

other than that, it is very good

[Alex Caine]

Very calm, thoughtful sort of poem. love the way it flows. nice job!