Thinking of You

Thinking of You

A Poem by jyb333
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A short poem that came while... well while thinking of Her.

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Standing by the flower bed,

Thoughts of you swimming through my head,

Just you and me, it's all I want,

Lonliness just isn't any good for me,

Walking hand in hand,

Reassuring, comforting, quick to stand,

Heading for the light at the end of the tunnle,

For love is the wine of life,

Sit, let's drink it thankfully,

as togetherness is the food of life,

Sit, let's eat.

© 2009 jyb333


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in this line:
Thought of you swimming through my head,

you might want to change "thought" to "thoughts"

other than that, it is very good

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very calm, thoughtful sort of poem. love the way it flows. nice job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 28, 2009
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