the best
A Poem by john alan willox
you were
not the first
who tried,
with love pretended,
to
kill me…
but,
you were
the best…
© 2013 john alan willox
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The best is not always the first...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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the first time we part...it kills our heart...and when we come back to life, we are never quite the same...something like a zombie..
i like the last line...."you were the best"
and i? was "the poor little fool"
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Added on April 7, 2013
Last Updated on April 7, 2013
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john alan willoxtoronto, Canada
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i am a 63 year old canadian of scottish descent and have been writing since i was young - i look forward to your responses. more..
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