the best

the best

A Poem by john alan willox

you were not the first

who tried,

 with love pretended,

to

kill me…

 

but,

 

you were the best…

© 2013 john alan willox


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The best is not always the first...

Posted 11 Years Ago


the first time we part...it kills our heart...and when we come back to life, we are never quite the same...something like a zombie..


i like the last line...."you were the best"

and i? was "the poor little fool"

Posted 11 Years Ago



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john alan willox
john alan willox

toronto, Canada



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i am a 63 year old canadian of scottish descent and have been writing since i was young - i look forward to your responses. more..

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